Sunday, 18 November 2007

18.11.07 english homework LIFE AFTER DEATH

Is there some kind of life after death?

Many people believe that there’s a life after death. I don’t want to waste much time by thinking about this topic, because nobody is able to know what will happen until he or she is dead. I think it could be, that there is some kind of life after death and I would appreciate that, but I think it’s more realistic, that there’s nothing after death. There are no evidences for a life after death and I think many people have to look at this a little bit more critically. They should not believe everything what anybody says just because it’s the belief of any religion. A lot of people need something to believe in that makes their life reasonable. That is in my opinion the main reason for believing in a life after death.

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1 comment:

Guenter said...

Note:
- "there is no evidence that ..."
- "that makes their life meaningful" ("reasonable" = vernünftig)
- not comma before "that"
- well argued, fluent, some good vocabulary